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Autumn Haiku
sun falls down the sky
scatters diamonds on water
brown leaf floats away
Autumn Haiku
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Autumn Haiku
All women are beautiful. Period.
I deserve better than survival.
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Re: Autumn Haiku
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That's beautiful. I love the autumn. I can see the brown leaf floating, it's very peaceful.
That's beautiful. I love the autumn. I can see the brown leaf floating, it's very peaceful.
Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all.
— Emily Dickinson
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Thank you, there.
I am a very visual person and I love the image in your poem.
scars
I am a very visual person and I love the image in your poem.
scars
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Reason: Changed MT to NT, for no triggering detail
Reason: Changed MT to NT, for no triggering detail
A scar is the tattoo of a triumph to be proud of. It says the hurt is over and the wound is closed. It means you conquered the pain, learned a lesson, grew stronger, and moved forward. There is a beauty in my scars that I can see now.
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lovely! thank you, there
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Beautiful
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There,
Yours is the ONLY haiku I have EVER liked. Bad experience in school made me hate it. It seemed I was the ONLY kid who did not get it. Anyway, I really love autumn and I think your haiku is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Redisfinallyfree
Yours is the ONLY haiku I have EVER liked. Bad experience in school made me hate it. It seemed I was the ONLY kid who did not get it. Anyway, I really love autumn and I think your haiku is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Redisfinallyfree
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Thank you, all---
Featherlight, Scsrs, Oceantide, Rosahope, Redisfinallyfree.
Featherlight, Scsrs, Oceantide, Rosahope, Redisfinallyfree.
All women are beautiful. Period.
I deserve better than survival.
I deserve better than survival.