I’m not supposed to ask

For all members who enjoy writing poetry or who use poetry to express their strongest emotions.
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wingnine
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I’m not supposed to ask

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I’m here, I’m fighting to be here
I can’t fight anymore
Am I floating up, or sinking down?
Voices echo
Vision’s blurry
Eyes are stuck unfocused
I’m breathing heavy
Or am am still I breathing?
They’re talking, but I can’t hear them
Wait, who am I? I’m not supposed to ask
She felt threatened, so we floated away
Or did we sink?
Air or water?
Is my head still there?

Who am I?
How old am I?
Where am I?
Am I safe?
I’m not supposed to ask

Fighting to stay present
Fighting a hopeless battle
I’ll always float away
Or was it sinking?
Scars
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Post by Scars »

LOVE THIS!
It's right on.

keep writing
keep sharing
scars
A scar is the tattoo of a triumph to be proud of. It says the hurt is over and the wound is closed. It means you conquered the pain, learned a lesson, grew stronger, and moved forward. There is a beauty in my scars that I can see now.
wingnine
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Re: I’m not supposed to ask

Post by wingnine »

Thank you so much, scars 🥺
I have been trying to use music writing as an outlet. I love music. I’ve been so blocked, but I’m hoping to turn this into music if anything just for myself.
Last edited by Jonesy on Sun Apr 03, 2022 5:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Changed MT to NT, for no triggering detail
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