Eat to Sleep

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Oceantide
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Eat to Sleep

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We need to sleep
Instead we eat
We splurge and gorge
And grow and flow
Exceeding our clothes
Growing our girths
Stuffing our bellies
Numbing our hurts
Paper
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Re: Eat to Sleep

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This is so relatable, Oceantide. I move from thing to thing for that last line… I remember this feeling. And now, as then, when I need to sleep I do things to numb what I can so I’m not alone with it, if that makes sense. Thank you for sharing.
"... and the last thing I see is my heart, still beating, still beating... breaking out of my body and flying away like a bat out of hell...

"Bat Out of Hell," writer- Jim Steinman, producer- Todd Rudgren, 1979, performed by Meatloaf.
Oceantide
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Re: Eat to Sleep

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Thank you, Paper, it helps to know you can relate, though it feels sad as well...
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