STRONG

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Redisfinallyfree
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STRONG

Post by Redisfinallyfree »

Being strong feels wrong
Because they said not to tell.
I am strong.

Telling is bad for me, they said.
That never made sense in my head.
I am strong.

I didn’t tell while they were around.
But now they’re gone, I want it out.
I am strong.

So afraid but want to be brave
Even if they’ll know I’ve told.
I am strong.

It’s time to be bold.
I’m grown up now.
I am strong.

This is my time.
I will be free.
I am strong

I will learn to forgive and love me.
I did nothing wrong.
I am strong.

Strong.
I survived because I am strong.
I am strong. I AM strong. I AM STRONG!
Oceantide
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Re: STRONG

Post by Oceantide »

beautiful - love this!
Paper
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Re: STRONG

Post by Paper »

I love it too! And yes, you are strong, so strong, and you’re free to be strong.
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The only place I ever feel at home...."

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earthhorse
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Re: STRONG

Post by earthhorse »

You are strong. Strong fierce, strong brave, strong gentle, strong just, strong caring, strong wild and free, strong beautiful, strong graceful, strong oh so vulnerable, strong feelings. Strong like the wind, the sun, the sea and the deep beautiful earth. Strong like the one you have always been waiting for.

Thanks for sharing this powerful poem Redisfinallyfree.
"One kind word can warm three winter months"
Redisfinallyfree
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Re: STRONG

Post by Redisfinallyfree »

Dear Oceantide, Paper, and Earthhorse.

Thank you all so much. WE are strong.

Redisfinallyfree
Benjamin
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Re: STRONG

Post by Benjamin »

Beautiful lines
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Rosahope
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Re: STRONG

Post by Rosahope »

Yes, really beautiful!
Scars
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Re: STRONG

Post by Scars »

((((((((((((((((((((((( Redisfinallyfree )))))))))))))))))))))))))
I wish you could see yourself from my perspective.
I wish you could see yourself from Earthhorse's perspective.
I wish I could write like EH.
Strong like the wind, the sun, the sea and the deep beautiful earth.
You are a force of positive energy.
<3 scars
A scar is the tattoo of a triumph to be proud of. It says the hurt is over and the wound is closed. It means you conquered the pain, learned a lesson, grew stronger, and moved forward. There is a beauty in my scars that I can see now.
Redisfinallyfree
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Re: STRONG

Post by Redisfinallyfree »

Thank you Benjamin. Thank you Rosahope.
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Re: STRONG

Post by Redisfinallyfree »

(((((((((((((((((((((((((( Scars )))))))))))))))))))))))))))

I agree with you that Earthhorse writes beautifully. I think you do too. I can’t imagine how others see me. The idea is intimidating.
I’ll hold onto the idea that it’s a good thing sometimes. That would be nice.

Thank-you, Scars.

Redisfinallyfree
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