SURVIVORS

For all members who enjoy writing poetry or who use poetry to express their strongest emotions.
Please be advised this area can be triggering, so read cautiously.

Moderator: Jonesy

Post Reply
Redisfinallyfree
Member
Posts: 673
Joined: Fri Jun 17, 2022 6:37 pm

SURVIVORS

Post by Redisfinallyfree »

Horrors too great to speak
Break them into parts
Hiding truth from tiny selves
Stuck in place
Hurting and afraid
Alone feeling shame
Shouldering the blame
They stay silent
The individual becomes many
One of them tells
Invaded by the enemy
Lurking among the parts
Makes them want to die
Must protect the lie
Innocent yet worldly
Compassionate yet hard
Beautiful and scarred
Terrified yet brave
Protecting yet unable to save
Vulnerable yet strong
Crying silent tears
Going on for years
Life force so strong
Experiences so wrong
Need help to go on.
Paper
Member
Posts: 564
Joined: Mon Jun 13, 2022 9:14 pm

Re: SURVIVORS

Post by Paper »

(((((((((Redisfinallyfree)))))))))

So much truth here. Thank you for sharing this.

These last five lines especially hit home with me.
Crying silent tears
Going on for years
Life force so strong
Experiences so wrong
Need help to go on.
Edited by Paper to change to NT
Edited again by Paper to fix quote
"... I've been livin' in my own shell so long:
The only place I ever feel at home...."

"I Never Wrote Those Songs," Alice Cooper, Dick Wagner, 1977, Kobalt Music Publishing Ltd.
Rosahope
Member
Posts: 649
Joined: Sun Dec 05, 2021 5:08 pm

Re: SURVIVORS

Post by Rosahope »

Strong poem.
I am sorry for the horrors you faced.
Scars
Member
Posts: 836
Joined: Wed Jan 19, 2022 2:59 pm

Re: SURVIVORS

Post by Scars »

((((((((((((((((((((((( Redisfinallyfree )))))))))))))))))))))))
I see you. I hear you. You are doing very healing work.
thank you for sharing your poem. It lifts me up.
<3 scars
A scar is the tattoo of a triumph to be proud of. It says the hurt is over and the wound is closed. It means you conquered the pain, learned a lesson, grew stronger, and moved forward. There is a beauty in my scars that I can see now.
Redisfinallyfree
Member
Posts: 673
Joined: Fri Jun 17, 2022 6:37 pm

Re: SURVIVORS

Post by Redisfinallyfree »

Thank you Paper. Thank you Scars. Dear Rosahope, thank you. I’m sorry for the horrors we have all faced. I’ve heard all of my life that “living well is the best revenge.” I hope we all will heal and live well.

Redisfinallyfree
Post Reply