Hymn

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there
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Hymn

Post by there » Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:55 pm

Silly sadness,
shouldn't be,
but it's what I feel.

And had this
harm passed me,
scars needn't heal.



As I feel this,
as I see,
a scar is living me.

then a balmy kiss
is pressed on me,
in sleep relieving me.



How do I find all I might miss?
deep is death.
I dig deeper, deep as sea.

Now these tough scars I bless
...between breaths...
their frame-a splint, a brace- saving me.
Reach for the stars. ---Christa McAuliffe

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Re: Hymn

Post by FainsFamily » Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:17 am

there

Your poem seems to speak to me in this very quiet and thoughtful place I'm in at the moment. Thank you for sharing it.

Fain

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Hymn

Post by confused @39 » Sat Nov 12, 2011 4:54 pm

That is beautiful. Thank you.

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