Balancing Act

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Oceantide
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Balancing Act

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Heavy now, heave ho
Weighted down, sinking low
Spreading out freezing limbs
Darkening thoughts congeal within

Grasp at the lever, heave ho pull
Move it, move it, up you will!
[Eye hate you Eye hate you]
[You’re awful so hateful]

Heave ho, up we go!
Try to dance, prance, my pretty
[Who do you think you are]
[Disgusting monstrous stop already]

Up and at ‘em, chop-chop-chop!
You want to dance, then never stop!
[Move it move it keep it light]
[Whirling swirling day and night]

Light on my feet, light in my heart
You know that light is Yellow part
Yellow on the left, Black on the right
Stand up sit down fight-fight-fight!
earthhorse
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Re: Balancing Act

Post by earthhorse »

This is definitely a dancing poem.

Sorry for the struggle. Seems like there is no where to trust and let go. Too much struggle, too much cruelty... And then a wicked sense of humor, and flight into the brightness...

No part of you is a monster, and you no longer do their bidding.

Please disregard if insensitive.

Got the wrench with you, heave ho.
EH
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Oceantide
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Re: Balancing Act

Post by Oceantide »

Thank you for your response, EH. I appreciate it...
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