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Watercolor
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How

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I wonder
How it is that your heart hardened
Became a fortress
Set adamantly against me
While I had been and sought to remain
Your ardent ally?

The pedestal you stood atop
Though you lost no luster in my eyes
Now tilts, has cracked
Pain shadows my view

I ask, Where have you fled
And why?
I never held a spear, offered no critiques
But covered your flaws or averted my eyes

A long road we trod, arms linked
Delighted, kindred spirits
Easy and comfortable

Now pointed words pierce me
I sink beneath your disfavor
Sickened in my soul
Perplexed, bewildered
I cry.
I cry.
Progress
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Re: How

Post by Progress »

Exquisitely written
Heartbreakingly painful

I feel your anguish and every word resonates.

I divorced my spouse 10 years ago.
Your poem perfectly expresses my experience back then

Sending you caring, compassion, and strength
there
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Re: How

Post by there »

Wow, Watercolor !
It is a beautiful poem.
Evocative, your truth.
All women are beautiful. Period.
I deserve better than survival.
Oceantide
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Re: How

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Watercolor, thank you for this poignant poem. It expresses a lot of powerful feelings that are familiar to me as well.
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Re: How

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I'm so sorry that each of you has known this kind of pain, Progress, there and Oceantide.

Thank you for coming through and reading and sharing your kind thoughts with me.
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