Do you look back now at what you done?
Are you ashamed or was i just for fun?
You took my trust even though you knew it wrong
You made me hurt for... I dont know how long.
Would you even remember my face if you stumbled on me today.
Would you see that little girl you made hurt in that way
When you took my innocence, made me look at the world with mistrust.
Did you ever stop to think of the aftermath or just about your lust.
First ever attempt at poetry sorry its not very good.
Do you ever look back now
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Re: Do you ever look back now
Shirongnl, I've had those thoughts many times. Thank you for your poem.
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Re: Do you ever look back now
Hi Shirongnl,
First attempt or hundredth attempt, it contains your emotion, it is your work, and you should be proud of it.
I remember posting my first attempt at poetry here three months ago and I said similar. But poetry is personal. It is an expression of your thoughts, feelings and self.
It's good.
Crow
First attempt or hundredth attempt, it contains your emotion, it is your work, and you should be proud of it.
I remember posting my first attempt at poetry here three months ago and I said similar. But poetry is personal. It is an expression of your thoughts, feelings and self.
It's good.
Crow
A little boy hides in an adult's disguise.
Quote taken from an original poem that I have written.
Quote taken from an original poem that I have written.