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A game

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2021 7:06 pm
by Chessgirl
Black and white
A board of squares
A royal enemy
A son spared

A tiny pawn
A hated child
The dark queen mother
Her charming smile

Sacrificed
It’s just a game
Or just a family
With puppets tamed

Don’t pay attention
Or be swayed
These power moves
Are their sick game

Re: A game

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2021 7:11 pm
by Crow
Wow! In my view this is your best yet! Love this! So creative, personal, and ruthless. :D

Crow

Re: A game

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2021 7:12 pm
by Chessgirl
Thanks crow! I just jotted that down now. It was after responding to your post about our usernames. Thanks for that nudge haha

Re: A game

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2021 7:15 pm
by Crow
I loved the chess theme!
The whole poem to me oozes creativity with almost subtle scathing undertones.
It's good. ;)

Crow

Re: A game

Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2021 7:18 pm
by Chessgirl
Ooooh Im glad you got tht vibe. I love your input.