China Doll

[Chessgirl]

I’m still working on this one. Just wanted to get an idea down


Stares off
Head in fog
Floating away
China doll

Child paused
I went away
They did this
Growth delay

Parents there
Honor them
Bible says
Don’t be grim

Here I am
They are gone
All grown up
Fate drawn

[Kokoschka]

Chessgirl,
I'd love to see an aquarell of this. Can picture China Girl floating far away until she gets to a safe shore where she can come out of the water to finally grow skin and flesh. This is really good.

Kokoschka

[dancingfish]

Lovely, Chessgirl. Thank you for sharing, I liked this and the feelings you put across in it. :)

[Nelll]

Thank you for this Chessgirl,
It paints an image that is soft yet sad.

Nll

[Crow]

I echo these thoughts above.

Crow

[Chessgirl]

Thank you everyone! It feels unfinished but still, you all made me feel better about what I have down so far!

[there]

Chessgirl,
I really see and feel this! Thanks for sharing it.

[Chessgirl]

Thanks there! I’m so glad you liked it!