Depression

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tabby
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Depression

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The black hole swirls and draws within its grasp
Pulling everything down into the abyss
Soon there is nothing but sparseness
As darkness envelopes the mind and body
Frozen in time and wasting unfettered
Torn scraps left behind in the dirt
Numbness and mindlessness complete
Dissolved and scattered amongst the chaos
tabby ... Just keep your head above... Swim
becomingbutterfly
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Re: Depression

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tabby, I'm sorry you struggle with this. I can relate. But, wow, you really have a way with words. You've created a fascinating visual which sucks me down into that hole where you're stuck, just pieces amid the black. That is so creative and stunning. Thank you for sharing; I'm honored to have been able to read this.
"Isn't it bewildering…that everything is so beautiful, despite all the horrors that exist?" ~Sophie Scholl
tabby
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Re: Depression

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River
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Re: Depression

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Tabby, sending care and support. Your not alone.

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tabby
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Re: Depression

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thanks river...
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Re: Depression

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Tabby, us here in real life understand. I know you are hurting.....sending care and support to you.

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underbridges
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Re: Depression

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Frozen in time and wasting unfettered.........Great Writing! I know this Darkness, Im sorry you are hurting.
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