Exposed

For all members who enjoy writing poetry or who use poetry to express their strongest emotions.
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becomingbutterfly
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Exposed

Post by becomingbutterfly »

My ribs are open and exposed
Deep incision cuts free
Things that cannot be zipped up
Secrets for all to see

Grasping, pull skin flaps tight closed
Protect my breathing lungs
Internal treasures naked
My heart unsealed to tongues

In hands they clench my heart enclosed
Some cherish some deride
Stabbing, bleeding, crying out
The soul I cannot hide

Verity of secrets opposed
Each face drips disbelief
I fear their judging silence
Embarrassment leads grief

And those compassionate disposed
What will they think of me?
Of all the pain I've suffered?
Will they just view debris?
"Isn't it bewildering…that everything is so beautiful, despite all the horrors that exist?" ~Sophie Scholl
GrowingTree
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Re: Exposed

Post by GrowingTree »

You are a great poet. I never could do the ryming too well.
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becomingbutterfly wrote:I fear their judging silenc
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[/quote] I like that sentence.
GrowingTree
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