You won't hurt me anymore

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littleflower
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You won't hurt me anymore

Post by littleflower » Tue Sep 11, 2012 12:41 pm

From the look in your eyes: the expression on your face
The actions you were expecting had not taken place
You thought you had conquered me: left me undone
By your most awful cruelty: the unkind words you spun

Yet, here I am standing: both wounded and sore:
But, you will not be hurting me like that any more
For I've found my firm footing: my true self within
And I'm letting go of you so that my new life can begin

So don't look in my direction or ever call me again
I'm letting go of the negatives that I had allowed in
From this day going forward till the sun doesn't shine
I won't let anything hurtful into this new heart of mine.

© littleflower
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Re: You won't hurt me anymore

Post by amalivo6 » Tue Sep 11, 2012 9:30 pm

(((((((((littleflower)))))))))))


very posative if your here in your head now you are in a good place

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Re: You won't hurt me anymore

Post by littleflower » Tue Sep 11, 2012 9:59 pm

Thank you amalivo: good to be in a good place..at least mentally. ;)

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Re: You won't hurt me anymore

Post by becomingbutterfly » Wed Sep 12, 2012 7:35 am

I really love your poetry, littleflower. This poem has such a lovely strength to it. Really beautiful.
"Isn't it bewildering…that everything is so beautiful, despite all the horrors that exist?" ~Sophie Scholl

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Re: You won't hurt me anymore

Post by littleflower » Wed Sep 12, 2012 9:41 am

Hello becomingabutterfly: thank you so very much for your kind words


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Re: You won't hurt me anymore

Post by bug » Fri Sep 14, 2012 11:23 pm

LittleFlower,
This is a very cool poem. In my head I am hearing it like slam poetry - like you are standing up and saying this out loud with all kinds of energy and fierceness. "You will NOT be hurting me like that anymore!" I love the strength in it - the way you are standing up for you and doing what you need to do to move forward. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Much love,
bug
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Re: You won't hurt me anymore

Post by Xanthia » Thu Oct 12, 2017 1:01 am

Hi littleflower,

Fantastic optimism in your poem. Thank you for sharing.

May life hold many positives for you at the moment.

As today is your birthday, I'm taking this opportunity to wish you a lovely beginning of your personal new year.

Sending whatever you would most appreciate for your healing journey.

With care,
Xanthia

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